Sunday, August 5, 2012

A Walk To Remember

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 30; the thirtieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

Walking on the beach, into your arms let me reach
Let me rest myself in them, share your warmth forever
Soft sand caressing feet, strong waves seducing the beach
Bathing in golden hues, the cold breeze moving us closer

A million unspoken words shared in a silent walk
Grieves and secrets thrown away in deep blue waters
Dreams and passions shared and unlocked under the dock
Binding our hearts, like the ships that share anchors

Laying down on the sand, tucking away peaceful moments
Staring at the twinkling stars, with not a worry in mind
Wonders that a warm hug can do, feelings a gentle tug cements
The golden sky looking mischievous, secrets to unravel treasures to find

To the intense currents of waves, the warm beach bows
To the questions that eyes pose, the answers a smile gives
To the answers that smile gives, a response in eyes glows
Feeling like an intruder, the sun takes our leave

Let the sun shy away; let the time stop for eternity
Let the candles melt away, let the sand swish under,
Let the world dissolve, leaving us in beautiful serenity
Let us lose each other, only to find in each other
The fellow Blog-a-Tonics who took part in this Blog-a-Ton and links to their respective posts can be checked here. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. I’m thankful to Leo, who introduced Blog-a-Ton to me, and I debuted in last 2 editions.
Credits Image - Shades of Orange by Harsha Chittar Courtesy - Curious Dino Photography via www.blogaton.in

31 comments:

  1. "Let us lose each other, only to find in each other"... Last line the best line...
    Great work.... Nice one... :)
    ATB.... :)

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    1. :) Thank you Nishant!! Keep visiting!!

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    2. Sure I'll...
      Also check my poem too... ;)

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  2. Manasa - this i sone of your best posts, and one of my favs now :)

    ATB for BAT

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    1. Thank You :).... your words give me a boost!

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  3. "To the questions that eyes pose, the answers a smile gives
    To the answers that smile gives, a response in eyes glows"

    so much to say yet no need of words

    beat wishes for BAT

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    1. Thank you Karan, All the best to you too !

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  4. //To the intense currents of waves, the warm beach bows
    To the questions that eyes pose, the answers a smile gives
    To the answers that smile gives, a response in eyes glows
    Feeling like an intruder, the sun takes our leave//

    Whoaaw, we are sure intruders! :) ATB!

    Do stop by my blog! Cheers - Kappu

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    1. :D... aim achieved then !! ATB to you too kappu

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  5. Wow, what a walk---Exquisite, sensual, a truly romantic poetry. Great job! Just loved this, Manasa.:))

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    1. Welcome to my blog Panchali. Glad that you loved, words from you mean a lot.Keep visiting!!

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  6. I like that last verse... let time stop for eternity.. yeah, it certainly feels so when we are at the beach, just enjoying the scene... :)

    Leo - My Blog-a-Ton Story

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    1. Thank you Leo, For me beach always means spending quality time with inner self or loved ones

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  7. Very sweet and romantic...Good One Manasa

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    1. Welcome Jaish ! Thank you!
      Keep visiting :)

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  8. Beautiful lines, good luck for BAT :)

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  9. Nice one.. I specially liked this line "A million unspoken words shared in a silent walk"

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  10. Nice one. This time's blog-a-ton seems to have inspired lot of poets.

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    1. Well, beach always inspires poets !! Keep Visiting :)

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  11. a million unsaid words lies in this comment.. hope you can read them.. Hats off.. Keep writing..

    Someone is Special

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  12. Awesome ending, i liked the ending concept a lot, fresh & very charmingly written !

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